I know it’s mostly the same express in the whole way through, but you did a good enough job with it that my first instinct was still to say ‘I like the expressions’. :D Third full panel is probably my favorite, I love the pose. And the interspersed panels showing the positions of the cars is a pretty cool idea, and seems to work well, too.
Please don’t take this as grammar nazism; but the mouse-over text has a typo I think. I guess it was intended to be “a single hearT beat” not a “hear beat”.
I’m really interested to find out “What happened” though. Keep up the good work!
I know it’s mostly the same express in the whole way through, but you did a good enough job with it that my first instinct was still to say ‘I like the expressions’. :D Third full panel is probably my favorite, I love the pose. And the interspersed panels showing the positions of the cars is a pretty cool idea, and seems to work well, too.
Thanks! I’ve gotten a lot of good feedback about this page.
Please don’t take this as grammar nazism; but the mouse-over text has a typo I think. I guess it was intended to be “a single hearT beat” not a “hear beat”.
I’m really interested to find out “What happened” though. Keep up the good work!
Thanks! Should be fixed now.