Don’t Barf in My Car 07
Ahh friendship.
This next bit is a good bit. Come back Tuesday for the next good bit.
Also don’t forget about the Kickstarter! It’s still chugging along!
Ahh friendship.
This next bit is a good bit. Come back Tuesday for the next good bit.
Also don’t forget about the Kickstarter! It’s still chugging along!
…I think I’m going to keep commenting. Because the kickstarter looks awesome but I have no income and it’s a way to feel productive. xD
I really like the different expressions on this page. And the background color change in the third panel is interesting, along with the lack of dialogue it really makes the panel stand out from the rest of the page when you’re zoomed out. I can’t quite tell though, does Ed make a noise or something? Jackson gets back there pretty quick, from walking forward with is back towards him.
Whoops, sorry it took so long to reply to this!
Please, keep commenting! I haven’t attracted any nasty commenters yet, so I like reading comments!
It’s implied that Ed would make some sort of sound, but I wanted all the focus to be on the stomach and the lines coming from there, so I left out a speech bubble. Even if Jackson didn’t hear Ed, he would have noticed that Ed wasn’t behind him and gone to see what’s wrong. Sorry if it looks like Jackson just appears suddenly, but him turing around to come back wasn’t really the important part.
That’s good! If you do get any less than desireable commenters, do you have a way to block them on this site?
Ah, okay. The panel stands out so much more without a speech bubble, really, I’m glad you left it out. And from Ed’s expression it would
be more of a stretch to think he *didn’t* make some sort of pained noise. I guess I was mostly wondering whether that was your intention.